Here is the animatic that I did for my Concept Development 3 class. It is kind of a rough sketch animatic, but I like the way it turned out for now. The idea behind the concept is that we study so much war and violence through history, why can't we save one day for peace. So through that I decided to actually go into history books and see them come to life.
Hi Justin,
ReplyDeleteNice animatic, I really like your concept overall. One thing I'd suggest is making more of the transition to peace. RIght now it happens very quickly that one hand comes in to close the book and then the other hands enter. I wonder if this should start happening sooner, maybe one hand closes one book, then maybe two close a couple books, then a couple hands close one book, then maybe on the final book a group of hands join together to close the final book. Again, just to sort of build up to it and spend more time showing the process of coming together for peace. Maybe when the books close, you could have some fun with the war stuff that escaped from the books dissolving away or something.
Your concept is that we should be spending more time thinking/studying peace, so maybe the animation should also take more time with the peace part...?
Just some thoughts to kick around...